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AN: for the FMA and FMAB fans out there. IE, me. And probably like 4 other peoples. Maybe.

!!WARNING: THIS FANFIC INCLUDES SOME EXTREME FLUFF, SMEXYTYPE HINTS, AND SHIRTLESS EDWARD ELRIC!!

This story takes place during the main storyline, but there's not any huge spoilers. I'm trying to keep it fairly non-plotline, so if you haven't seen one series, you can still understand WTF is going on. Ed still has both his automail arm and automail leg.
LET THE STORY BEGIN.

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The midmorning sun shone through your window, white curtains not helping at all. It was time for you to get up, but you really didn't want to. Yesterday's fight training was not sitting well. You were covered in bruises, and your white sleep shirt showed them on your legs. Your trainer and long-time friend, Edward Elric, really wasn't going easy on you.

His brother was back in their hometown of Resembool, and he was stuck here with you, training you, just in case something ever happened. You were a translator for General Mustang and his immediate troop, and all of you were in Central City, getting ready to head off to wherever next.

"Guess I should probably get up and make breakfast," you said, pulling off the plain covers and sitting up. You swung your legs over the side of the bed, stretching your arms behind you. Yeah, you could definitely feel yesterday's training. "I wonder if Ed's up yet…"

You and the Fullmetal Alchemist were rooming together, with everyone else just down the hall.

To no one's surprise, Ed hadn't awakened yet, so you sauntered into the kitchen and scavenged around in the fridge. Nothing but the bare minimum: milk, eggs, and butter. The cupboards contained flour, sugar, baking powder, and salt and pepper. Searching through your mind for something to whip up with your amazing 'Cooking Alchemy', you remembered an old recipe for pancakes.

"Perfect!" you cried out, slamming your first into your palm. You were going to make breakfast for yourself and Edward Elric.

/

After mixing up the batter and plopping the first blob on the hot pan, you heard a door shut nearby. "Edward must be awake," you thought, your heart pounding in your throat. "Hold on. Am I in love with Edward?" It wouldn't really surprise anyone if you were. You had known Ed for so long; everyone already thought you two were together. Winry was even a little jealous.

You were knocked out of your reverie when a pair of arms wrapped their way around your waist. "Mornin', (name)."

"Oh my god, is he still half asleep? This is so weird yet so awesome at the same time oh my god. Now, what do I say?!" you thought frantically, feeling Edward's blonde hair tangle up with your (hair colour) hair. He had grown, and could no longer be called pipsqueak. He was even taller than you.

"Mornin', Ed. Want to help make pancakes?" you said, your voice somewhat flirty. Hopefully you could get Ed to do all the hard work.

He grunted, and you turned around, spatula in hand. You squeaked and turned a furious red, quickly turning around again.

Ed was shirtless.

He was confused, and turned you back around with one hand, grabbing the spatula with the other. "What's wrong?" he asked, pushing you gently out of the way to stand in front of the stove. You shuddered and blushed, his automail arm freezing cold on your (skin colour) skin.

"Hey, Ed?" you almost whispered, your voice cracking and nearly giving out on you. The blonde boy looked over and down at you. "C-can you feel?"

Ed blinked a few times, wondering what you meant. You quickly corrected yourself.

"I mean, can you feel things with your automail? Like, can you feel this?" You reached out for his right hand, grabbing it with one of yours and swirling your fingers around on his palm, making small circles.

Ed gulped, looking somewhat nervous, and blushed. "I….I-"

You cut him off, running your fingers up his arm. "Can you feel this?" Edward pulled you closer to him, flicking off the stove with his over hand and moving the pancakes off the burner.

"I think I can…" he mumbled, grabbing the backs of your legs and setting you up on the counter. You put your hands around his neck, drawing him in. Your foreheads touched, and he gazed into your (eye colour) eyes.

"(Name)…" he whispered, dreamlike.

"Ed…" you said, taking a deep breath. This was the final move, and if he didn't accept it, your friendship with the Elrics would probably be ruined forever.

"Can you feel this?"

Your lips touched, and a spark flew through your body.

You just kissed Edward Elric.

And he was kissing back.

/

So yeah. This is what I do when I'm supposed to be studying for finals.
I love you guys, give me more feedback! Please! :heart:
LOL
WHAT IS THIS
I DONT EVEN-

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This story and idea belong to :iconicarasaurus:
You belong to :iconedelricplz: LOL I MEAN YOU BELONG TO YOURSELF

ICKEE PLZ
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:iconotakuanimeluv123:
OtakuAnimeLuv123 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  New member
Edward Elric (I got this) [V1] AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW YEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!
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Cryaotic8008135 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2014  Student Artist
Hot hot hot hot hot hot hot hot :rainbowfrog: 
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
I'll get Canada to make pancakes
Ed won't notice him and I don't care
So we can just make out
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:iconedwardcrusher:
Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
TRRUUUEEEEEE
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:iconlucijohn:
Lucijohn Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
YUS!
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:icondeathscythe4242:
deathscythe4242 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Neko Emoji-41 - (Kawaii Waving) [V3] so cuuuuuuuttttteee
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:iconsnow5555:
Snow5555 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Kyouko Toshinou (Sparkle Nose Bleed) [V1] Ed
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:iconedwardcrusher:
Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"911 what's your emergency?"

"well, um, yeah, my daughter sage just fainted after reading a "Edward x reader" and her nose is bleeding like pouring out of her nose.........."

"......"

"yeah I know, but that's my daughter for yea hehehehehehahahahahaheh"
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Dragons103 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Student Writer
THIS COMMENT IS THE BEST
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:iconicarasaurus:
Icarasaurus Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
you should probably get that checked out
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:iconedwardcrusher:
Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Very possibly. But then again, I get a lot of those ;P
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Student Artist
./////. OMG shirtless ed ..... *nosebleeds* oh god -_-
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:iconfullmetalpain:
FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Artist
i saw the word pancakes and i was all like :*EPIC GASP* PANCAKES!
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
and this happens all because of pancakes.
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:iconicarasaurus:
Icarasaurus Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
lots can happen because of pancakes, my dear
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:iconelephantgirl202:
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014
mhm
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swordmastertrunks Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student General Artist
It was so cute!!!
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:iconvictoria0502:
Victoria0502 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
I LOVE IT!!!!!! PLEASE DO MORE
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here-comes-tsubaki Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'm on quotev
and dating Edward Elric
THANKS FOR THE STORYHamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] 
ME LEIK IT
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SkyeHighArt Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your username, icon, and the fact that you like Edward make you possibly the most amazing person I've ever met.... It's like my three favorite animes were all smashed together in my symmetry pot.....





Im weird, okay? Don't judge...
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Blackheart546 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
"Ed was shirtless". 

SUDDENLY, ATTACK OF THE FANGIRLS. 
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:iconkonakona321:
Konakona321 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Shingeki No Fangirls~
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AskWhiteWolfViolet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great story btw X3
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AskWhiteWolfViolet Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I wove pancakes!!!!
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EmmaBearPSHS Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Writer
I want to make pancakes with Ed more often tehehe
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ShySong Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
PANCAKESSSS
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Lilife1234 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Loved it
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:iconduckyfangirl8:
duckyfangirl8 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
But what about the pancakes? they will get cold!
(It's ok cuz Ed is kissing me)
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*finishes reading* :iconbloodynoseplz: omg such fluff! thats my edward!
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:iconmidnaplayer:
MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
fuk cooking Alchemy! I can cook better traditionally than what any alchemy could do! :iconbiggrinplz:
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sabrinayamazaki Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*sos pathetically because this story is just so beautiful* ....... *gwts dragged off to the side by an annoyed Soul Eater* [Soul]; How uncool.
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Megafangirl77 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kyouko Toshinou (Sparkle Nose Bleed) [V1] Llama Emoji-16 (Nose Bleed) [V1] nose bleed Hatsune Miku-09 (No No No No) 
Yesssssssssssssss
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EvilJellyBean13 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Just saying you should make a valantines one some time it would be so cute. I LOVE your stories,words can't even explain LOVE YOU ED♥♡♥♡
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EvilJellyBean13 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student General Artist
o///oThis is why I love Edward and pancakes. You are amazing at writing I hope u you decide to make more ed x reader. ... also go pancake victory ^w^
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ragexthexfurious Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dem pancakes doe
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i want more... :iconbegplz: More please....?
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EdwardAlchemist Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconpervplz: :iconeddanceplz:
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SassySassMaster Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHO KNEW PANCAKES WERE SO AWESOME?
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DeathIsOverRated Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Pancakes... smells like victory!
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
agreed
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FemPortugal Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wuv pancakes. :3
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TexanCowgirluvsLovi Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Completely agree.
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Mickxbeth2012 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

heck yeah! Id make pancakes for Edward Elric ,Tamaki suoh and fai d flowright!

 

Dang nabbit im such a fan girl !!!!

Jump Roping Ed Tamaki Suoh Chibi (could not find a gif for Fai)

 

loves the story

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autumnlovesnatsu Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
sorry for the word I'm going to say but :FUCK yeah!: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Shadowlover2 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
you should of made it in to a lemon. it would go perfect with this story! its so perfect and detailed and i LOVE IT!!
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:iconicarasaurus:
Icarasaurus Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
i've gotten suggestions to do this a couple of times actually!! i'm not exactly sure if i'm comfortable with doing this, so keep an eye out and see!! 
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Shadowlover2 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013
i will but if you feel uncomfortable then you don't have to but you have a great talent!
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:iconicarasaurus:
Icarasaurus Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
ouo thank you!! i'll see what i can do, and i'd probably post it on a different account, to keep this one a bit more...i don't want to say professional at all, but cleaner i suppose?? if you know what i mean. 
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Shadowlover2 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
of course! could you send me a link to that account if you ever can?
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:iconicarasaurus:
Icarasaurus Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
certainly! just send me a note so i'll have your username down somewhere : ) 
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